Well Done Louis
Mybe next time you could descripe the monster coming towards you a bit more as it happened quite fast.
Overall I really enjoyed reding your work.
Milla
Brilliant Louis b! I love the description.Also I think the way you described the way trevor growled.Next time describe the monster.Overall, I loved reading your work.
Well Done Louis
Mybe next time you could descripe the monster coming towards you a bit more as it happened quite fast.
Overall I really enjoyed reding your work.
Milla
Brilliant Louis b! I love the description.Also I think the way you described the way trevor growled.Next time describe the monster.Overall, I loved reading your work.
Excellent louis! good punctuation I liked the part when you said to Trever “Whats wrong”