the surfer

Posted on July 22, 2013 by Deleted User
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1 Response to the surfer

  1. HARRY ROWLING says:
    December 14, 2013 at 9:49 am

    well done louis! I really like the description like ” sizzling hot day”. Also I like the conjunctions. Next time do more commas

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