I loved your writting and words but maybe you could make it a bit more about Oh dear !I forgort it was a leap year.But apart from that it was brilliant.
Wow, I really liked that. I knew that I had a hard time trying to figure out what to write about for this subject. I liked how simple it was! It was perfect!
Wow Mia! This is a great 100 word challenge and you taught me some words that I did not know, like chimmed. I thought you were really focused on your 100 word challenge and based your story very well on the prompt ‘Oh dear I forgot it was leap year’. You worked well on the structure of your writing and from your mind you have produced such lovely piece of work.
Wow I really loved your 100 wc . It was magnificent . You created a lot a massive brain movie in my head . You had lots of adjectives and verbs . Well done . Good to sea you on the 100 word challenge.
Wow Mia! This is a great 100 word challenge and you taught me some words that I did not know, like chimmed. I thought you were really focused on your 100 word challenge and based your story very well on the prompt ‘Oh dear I forgot it was leap year’. You worked well on the structure of your writing to keep your reader reading on and on and from your mind you have produced such lovely piece of work.
wow Mia I never new your writting could be so intresting, there were so many words I have never heared of
I loved your writting and words but maybe you could make it a bit more about Oh dear !I forgort it was a leap year.But apart from that it was brilliant.
Wow, I really liked that. I knew that I had a hard time trying to figure out what to write about for this subject. I liked how simple it was! It was perfect!
You have good word use and it was very creative. I think it was just a little confusing. Maybe try to explain yourself or try to be more descriptive.
You used a lot of nouns and verbs , also lovely adjectives . Well done
Wow Mia! This is a great 100 word challenge and you taught me some words that I did not know, like chimmed. I thought you were really focused on your 100 word challenge and based your story very well on the prompt ‘Oh dear I forgot it was leap year’. You worked well on the structure of your writing and from your mind you have produced such lovely piece of work.
Wow I really loved your 100 wc . It was magnificent . You created a lot a massive brain movie in my head . You had lots of adjectives and verbs . Well done . Good to sea you on the 100 word challenge.
Wow Mia! This is a great 100 word challenge and you taught me some words that I did not know, like chimmed. I thought you were really focused on your 100 word challenge and based your story very well on the prompt ‘Oh dear I forgot it was leap year’. You worked well on the structure of your writing to keep your reader reading on and on and from your mind you have produced such lovely piece of work.
We loved your story and we espshly liked the bgining.