The Evacuation part 1, the unexpected letter.

Posted on November 12, 2013 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to The Evacuation part 1, the unexpected letter.

  1. Danny says:
    November 18, 2013 at 11:38 am

    I really like your use of adjectives and paragraphs. I don’t have a wish!

  2. Zack says:
    November 20, 2013 at 8:13 am

    Well done.
    I really like the story i couldn’t stop reading it because of the brilliant powerful words.
    Great description, especially when you said the mum went pale :).

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