You have made a very good point Oscar, I agree with you, and I think many other people will to because you explained your resons.
I can easily see you checked through this many times and your comma lists are perfect.
although remember names like Indians and Cowboys need capitals
I really liked your work,
you have got good punctuation like full stops, commars and more.But you need work on your grammer.
However loved reading it.
I like how you say that children can learn history from war games but try and think about both arguments.
You have made a very good point Oscar, I agree with you, and I think many other people will to because you explained your resons.
I can easily see you checked through this many times and your comma lists are perfect.
although remember names like Indians and Cowboys need capitals
Thanks I will try and work on that.
I really like reading your work,
you’ve got a great opinion. And strong writing. maybe use better grammar.
I will try to use better gamma next time.