Amazing I love the style of poem because its not long and boring its short but it contains a lot of infomation.
I realy like the death in caps and red at the end.
And its fun to read.
Really great work.
The adjectives are amazing, even better it has description whilst giving great information.
Maybe next time you should use different figurative language, such as personifacation, similies, six senses or metaphors.
I Think you used adjectives really well like “absurd axis bruttaly bombing brits” I don’t think you have to do anything better.
Amazing I love the style of poem because its not long and boring its short but it contains a lot of infomation.
I realy like the death in caps and red at the end.
And its fun to read.
It was very good. I like the bit where it says DEATH because it realy shows you how horribel war is.
Really good fun to read, and an interesting style of poem. It really makes you want to read it again.
Good use of apostraphies.
Really great work.
The adjectives are amazing, even better it has description whilst giving great information.
Maybe next time you should use different figurative language, such as personifacation, similies, six senses or metaphors.
Plus maby next time you could make it a pyramid shape instead of a diamond.
Really googd aliteration , I like the style of poem you have
chosen it is very fun to read. I also like the shape you have chosen well done.
It was very good, becuase you have used lots of adjectives,and you have made this pyramid poem really good ,although you could use diffrent words.
I loved this with all the adjectives and alliteration, I think that its way past your age group.It also has a brilliant ending,no improvement needed.
Good work its amazing.
Good adverds.
Good adjectives