Hi Emma, I think your blog is very interesting and gives a point,I agree with what you wrote. You have used good conjunctions like on the other hand. Next time, try and add some adjectives. I am looking forward to reading another one of your blogs.
Hi Emma,I like post alot as you used a nice conjunction its also a nice opinion but what about war toys?
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Hi Emma, I think your blog is very interesting and gives a point,I agree with what you wrote. You have used good conjunctions like on the other hand. Next time, try and add some adjectives.
I am looking forward to reading another one of your blogs.
Hi Emma,I like post alot as you used a nice conjunction its also a nice opinion but what about war toys?