Well done you have included lots of interesting information from your Grandmother.
I liked the way you organised your work in clear paragraphs. I liked the way you used commas and dashes really well.
Although you need to put a space between your commas and take time to read through so it makes sense.
Well done you have included lots of interesting information from your Grandmother.
I liked the way you organised your work in clear paragraphs. I liked the way you used commas and dashes really well.
Although you need to put a space between your commas and take time to read through so it makes sense.