What a funny story, Alexandra!
I enjoyed reading it, and I had a good laugh at the end.
Although, you could have partied with your family all the same, don´t you think?
Are people in your family superstitious about celebrating birthdays early?
Hi Alexandra – what a great story! Now I’d love to know what your presents were and also what the party was like. Did you enjoy your birthday and was it fantastic?
From Kirsty & Becky 🙂 http://www.ashclassgreenfields.blogspot.com
I liked this peice of work because they thort it was your birthday but it was the next day.
I also liked the twist at the end.
I liked your work but there could of been more puncuation
Please visit the St Peter’s Church of England Primary School 100 Word Challenge Blog http://classes.st-peters-school.org.uk/year6—100-word-challenge.html
Hi Alexandra,
Thanks for submitting your story to the 100 word challenge. It sounds to me like your family were more excited about your birthday than you were!!
At least you didn’t have to worry the night before that they might have forgotten. If it’s not true then this is a great idea. Well done!
What a funny story, Alexandra!
I enjoyed reading it, and I had a good laugh at the end.
Although, you could have partied with your family all the same, don´t you think?
Are people in your family superstitious about celebrating birthdays early?
Hi Alexandra – what a great story! Now I’d love to know what your presents were and also what the party was like. Did you enjoy your birthday and was it fantastic?
From Kirsty & Becky 🙂
http://www.ashclassgreenfields.blogspot.com
I liked this peice of work because they thort it was your birthday but it was the next day.
I also liked the twist at the end.
I liked your work but there could of been more puncuation
Please visit the St Peter’s Church of England Primary School 100 Word Challenge Blog
http://classes.st-peters-school.org.uk/year6—100-word-challenge.html
Hi Alexandra,
Thanks for submitting your story to the 100 word challenge. It sounds to me like your family were more excited about your birthday than you were!!
At least you didn’t have to worry the night before that they might have forgotten. If it’s not true then this is a great idea. Well done!