I liked it. I thought it was very interesting how you mixed it up a bit with the tricky question. It was pretty good I wouldn’t of known the answer to that question either. Very Nice!
Hello Sophie,
I have read your 100 word challenge and you have blown me away. I loved how you made your 100 word challenge make you really embarssed and I loved the answer that you gave Miss Honey in your story. You have built up the exitment to make it really good. I hope you continue to write as good as you are doing now.
From Chloe at High Lawn Primary School, Bolton.
Very cool. Nice writing. good job sophie. i like the stuff about sapphire. yeaa..
Thanks for the comment nick
This is a very clever story. I liked it a lot. I thought that is was very well written. You did a very good job.
I liked it. I thought it was very interesting how you mixed it up a bit with the tricky question. It was pretty good I wouldn’t of known the answer to that question either. Very Nice!
This is a very engaging and amusing story Sophie. Well done!
thankyou for your comment Sarah
Hello Sophie,
I have read your 100 word challenge and you have blown me away. I loved how you made your 100 word challenge make you really embarssed and I loved the answer that you gave Miss Honey in your story. You have built up the exitment to make it really good. I hope you continue to write as good as you are doing now.
From Chloe at High Lawn Primary School, Bolton.
A really good 100 word challenge. Its got lots of good discribing words.
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I really enjoyed reading your work. I really imagened it.
Wow Soph I love the way you made it funny as well as a really good story
also I the way you discriped your face when you got the question wrong.