To Emily, I really like your post:) It doesn’t look muck like 100 words but there very persuasive words. I hope that your post is true so that the people of the Philippines will live.
-Louie M
Hi Emily,
WOW that was amazing. I really enjoyed reading that . You have really thought about the situations
the Philippines are in . furthermore you have tried to comfort them by saying that you wish they could
have a wonderful life just like us. Keep it up. :):)
Emily, I really liked that! It will deffinetly persuade people from the Philippenes to get back on their own two feet (or one, maybe even none) and carry on with their fantastic lives. You really put your heart into it. Well done.
Hi Emily,
WOW! This letter was really good that I almost felt like I was a Philippines child myself. I really liked this letter also because it had a lot of encouragement in it as well as some description. Next time try to make it 100 words as it is in the 100 word challenge.
Hi Emily,
I really like your post. As Louie said it doesn’t look like 100 words but when I read it it makes dwell with happiness. I like the way you have tried to comfort them by saying ” you can make it through this”. Can’t wait till you publish another piece of writing!
Hi Emily that was really good.
It was technically very correct plus it was a brilliant choice of words. I think you really connected with those poor children in the Philippines and gave them hope to carry on. I love reading your work so keep it up well done.
Barbara McFall (Team 100WC) The Phoenix School, MA USA says:
Hello Emily,
Your writing this week reflects what so many of us feel. It’s important to take the opportunity to think about others and let them know we care. Your thoughts are very inspirational. I especially liked that you wrote that we are all rooting for them. Good job!
Barbara McFall, Team 100WC
The Phoenix School, Salem, MA US
To Emily, I really like your post:) It doesn’t look muck like 100 words but there very persuasive words. I hope that your post is true so that the people of the Philippines will live.
-Louie M
Hi Emily,
WOW that was amazing. I really enjoyed reading that . You have really thought about the situations
the Philippines are in . furthermore you have tried to comfort them by saying that you wish they could
have a wonderful life just like us. Keep it up. :):)
Emily, I really liked that! It will deffinetly persuade people from the Philippenes to get back on their own two feet (or one, maybe even none) and carry on with their fantastic lives. You really put your heart into it. Well done.
Hi Emily,
WOW! This letter was really good that I almost felt like I was a Philippines child myself. I really liked this letter also because it had a lot of encouragement in it as well as some description. Next time try to make it 100 words as it is in the 100 word challenge.
Maddie
Hi Emily,
I really like your post. As Louie said it doesn’t look like 100 words but when I read it it makes dwell with happiness. I like the way you have tried to comfort them by saying ” you can make it through this”. Can’t wait till you publish another piece of writing!
Lucy
Hi Emily that was really good.
It was technically very correct plus it was a brilliant choice of words. I think you really connected with those poor children in the Philippines and gave them hope to carry on. I love reading your work so keep it up well done.
Hello Emily,
Your writing this week reflects what so many of us feel. It’s important to take the opportunity to think about others and let them know we care. Your thoughts are very inspirational. I especially liked that you wrote that we are all rooting for them. Good job!
Barbara McFall, Team 100WC
The Phoenix School, Salem, MA US