Hi Sophie,
I really enjoyed reading you writing and learning about your grandma in the war. You had a good use of commas and you ordered it really well. The only thing I can think of that you can improve on is tiny but you missed the space between 3 and months, Sorry I couldn’t think of any thing proper, that’s how good it was!
Hi Sophie,
I really enjoyed reading you writing and learning about your grandma in the war. You had a good use of commas and you ordered it really well. The only thing I can think of that you can improve on is tiny but you missed the space between 3 and months, Sorry I couldn’t think of any thing proper, that’s how good it was!