Well done.
I really agree with you, presumably it was hard and tricky.
Great punctuation and good strong reasons why it was hard.
Maybe use better vocabulary next time.
It is good ,but it dosen’t make sence when you say ” Where ever you were you had to find shelter so you can be safe” becouse that is ment for air raids not evacuation.
Well done.
I really agree with you, presumably it was hard and tricky.
Great punctuation and good strong reasons why it was hard.
Maybe use better vocabulary next time.
It is good ,but it dosen’t make sence when you say ” Where ever you were you had to find shelter so you can be safe” becouse that is ment for air raids not evacuation.