Well done your story is outstanding. You have really tried your best and spended your time. You have used good punctuation and you have put them in the correct places. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done!
Hi Niyusha! I enjoyed reading your story for this week’s 100WC. Leap years can cause a lot of confusion, and I think you captured that very well. Also that you were in such a hurry to get to the party that you didn’t take time to listen to your mother! There’s a lesson in there somewhere! The only thing about your story is that by accident you have got two ‘todays’ and I think probably you meant to start your story with ‘Yesterday…’ but I totally understood what you meant. Well done!
Well done your story is outstanding. You have really tried your best and spended your time. You have used good punctuation and you have put them in the correct places. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done!
I really like your story and i wonder what will happen next.
Hi Niyusha! I enjoyed reading your story for this week’s 100WC. Leap years can cause a lot of confusion, and I think you captured that very well. Also that you were in such a hurry to get to the party that you didn’t take time to listen to your mother! There’s a lesson in there somewhere! The only thing about your story is that by accident you have got two ‘todays’ and I think probably you meant to start your story with ‘Yesterday…’ but I totally understood what you meant. Well done!