Your first sentence really caught my attention. I loved the adjectives you used. I liked your story, too. It would be very interesting if my birthday was on Leap Year. I’d be so young!
Hello, I think you 100wc is great because you used connectives, punctuation and much more. You used a literation at the begining, aswell as the others. Any way I think you deserve to get a show case because it’s fantastic. And keep entering the 100wc because your doing a great job. So well done, keep it up!
From Annalise at High Lawn Primary School (6D)
Wow, that is amazing. I really thought about how it would feel to not have a birthday. You used a wide range of great connectives such as because, after that. Your punctuation is great espescially how you used alot of speech and exclamation marks. Well done.
WOW this is an wonderful piece of work. You have used some exciting vocabuary.
I enjoyed your very descriptive word. You used them very well and I wish I could write like that.
Your first sentence really caught my attention. I loved the adjectives you used. I liked your story, too. It would be very interesting if my birthday was on Leap Year. I’d be so young!
Hello, I think you 100wc is great because you used connectives, punctuation and much more. You used a literation at the begining, aswell as the others. Any way I think you deserve to get a show case because it’s fantastic. And keep entering the 100wc because your doing a great job. So well done, keep it up!
From Annalise at High Lawn Primary School (6D)
Wow, that is amazing. I really thought about how it would feel to not have a birthday. You used a wide range of great connectives such as because, after that. Your punctuation is great espescially how you used alot of speech and exclamation marks. Well done.