brilliant post Bryn. I loved the bit at the end where you said that they had 24 days to catch all 6 gagsters. However, some of the story didn’t make sense like when you wrote “Jack was dealing with his own problems he was surrounded by dogs with diabetes dribbling blood,” when you should have written “Jack was dealing with his on problems. He was surrounded by dogs with blood dribbling from their mouths which was infected with diabetes.”Apart from that it was perfect
WHat a good word colossal ! well done!
brilliant post Bryn. I loved the bit at the end where you said that they had 24 days to catch all 6 gagsters. However, some of the story didn’t make sense like when you wrote “Jack was dealing with his own problems he was surrounded by dogs with diabetes dribbling blood,” when you should have written “Jack was dealing with his on problems. He was surrounded by dogs with blood dribbling from their mouths which was infected with diabetes.”Apart from that it was perfect
Casper Tetherdown primary school
Hi Bryn
Good adjectives and good story. Next time check your captial letters
well done