Thank you very much for entering the 100 Word Challenge this week, I enjoyed reading your writing. I like the way you have started the next Chapter of the comic with dialogue as this grabs the reader’s attention and makes them want to read more. You have clearly introduced a new character and described him.
Well done!
Mrs Stones http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
Hi Maddie,
Thank you very much for entering the 100 Word Challenge this week, I enjoyed reading your writing. I like the way you have started the next Chapter of the comic with dialogue as this grabs the reader’s attention and makes them want to read more. You have clearly introduced a new character and described him.
Well done!
Mrs Stones
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/