Hi Anna! I liked your post. It was very descriptive.
Next Time: You could check you punctuation. Whilst I was reading your post I realised that when it came to speech marks you either – missed them out / or put them in the wrong place. Maybe you could go to Ms. Cohen and tell her that you don’t really understand speech marks.
Hi Anna,
You have really made me picture an atmosphere in my head with your good descriptions.Next time you could add more detail about the characters.
Hi Anna,
I loved your different speech verbs, such as “squealed”, “added” and “whispered”. It made your story much more interesting to read- well done.
Fiona (Team 100WC)
well done Anna i liked your good verbs and adjectives.Maybe you could add a bit more about the adventure they had.
Hi Anna! I liked your post. It was very descriptive.
Next Time: You could check you punctuation. Whilst I was reading your post I realised that when it came to speech marks you either – missed them out / or put them in the wrong place. Maybe you could go to Ms. Cohen and tell her that you don’t really understand speech marks.
Maddie
Hi Anna,
You have really made me picture an atmosphere in my head with your good descriptions.Next time you could add more detail about the characters.
Hi Anna,
I loved your different speech verbs, such as “squealed”, “added” and “whispered”. It made your story much more interesting to read- well done.
Fiona (Team 100WC)