100wc week 13

3 Responses to 100wc week 13

1. Paul Huebl (Team 100WC) says:

   November 28, 2013 at 4:35 am

   Hi Grace,

   This is very good writing for Year 5! I loved the use of the stammering to help paint a picture of suspense. Well done!

   Paul Huebl
   Year 6 Teacher
   Adelaide, Australia
2. Chris says:

   November 30, 2013 at 12:48 pm

   Well done, Grace.
   An exciting chase scene with some good details.
   You build up the suspense well.

   Keep up the good work!
3. Anonymous says:

   December 1, 2013 at 12:27 pm

   Hi Grace,
   That was amazing i like your ecxiting verbs but watch your ‘there’ and ‘their’.

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