As soon as I started reading this piece I felt that I was in the middle of the action! I very much like the sound of ‘Graviton Ka’ – it sounds like a useful skill to have. Well done on producing an imaginative response to this weeks 100WC prompt, keep up the good work.
Well done Finn ! I like how you have described this man! Graviton Ka sounds like a useful skill, I think I would like to learn it! 🙂
Just remember to use speech marks when somebody is speaking!
Well done! ☺
Hi Finn,
As soon as I started reading this piece I felt that I was in the middle of the action! I very much like the sound of ‘Graviton Ka’ – it sounds like a useful skill to have. Well done on producing an imaginative response to this weeks 100WC prompt, keep up the good work.
Ju – 100WC Team
Well done Finn ! I like how you have described this man! Graviton Ka sounds like a useful skill, I think I would like to learn it! 🙂
Just remember to use speech marks when somebody is speaking!
Well done! ☺
Hi Finn,
I like yours because it was scary and you had good description of the jaw. and Graviton-Ka would be a useful skill to use in combat. WELL DONE
Hi Finn
I like your idea to this story. You used good adjectives. Next time intrudouse James or your character before the end.
Well done