I really like this, what an exciting story and great use of language. I like the idea of a “gulper”, with the wonderful image of a wide open mouth. The creepy image of someone clad only in leaves. This is great writing…I would like to find out what will happen next…
I really like this, what an exciting story and great use of language. I like the idea of a “gulper”, with the wonderful image of a wide open mouth. The creepy image of someone clad only in leaves. This is great writing…I would like to find out what will happen next…