Hi Boaz,
I love your story. You used very good descriptive words, such as beady crimson eyes, horrific creature, frantically… Your writing is very expressive, and you used punctuation quite well. The overall effect is excellent.
Good work!
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Hi Boaz,
I love your story. You used very good descriptive words, such as beady crimson eyes, horrific creature, frantically… Your writing is very expressive, and you used punctuation quite well. The overall effect is excellent.
Good work!