100 WC Comic Chapter

Posted on November 29, 2013 by Deleted User
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1 Response to 100 WC Comic Chapter

  1. Mrs LeDrew (100 WC Team, Waddington, UK) says:
    December 1, 2013 at 9:12 pm

    Hi Boaz,

    I love your story. You used very good descriptive words, such as beady crimson eyes, horrific creature, frantically… Your writing is very expressive, and you used punctuation quite well. The overall effect is excellent.

    Good work!

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