Thank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge, I enjoyed reading your writing. You’ve used some good vocabulary in your writing and you have used a range of punctuation for effect.
Well done!
Mrs Stones – Miriam Lord Bradford http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
Hi Lauryn,
Thank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge, I enjoyed reading your writing. You’ve used some good vocabulary in your writing and you have used a range of punctuation for effect.
Well done!
Mrs Stones – Miriam Lord Bradford
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/