Wow Jonah, you have packed this 100 word challenge full of adjectives and descriptive language. What on earth have Miss Marmalade and Nadia done to end up in prison? I really enjoyed reading your story! I think you’ve got a fabulous imagination and I’m looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.
I like that you used lots of adjectives and you put lots of description.
Wow Jonah, you have packed this 100 word challenge full of adjectives and descriptive language. What on earth have Miss Marmalade and Nadia done to end up in prison? I really enjoyed reading your story! I think you’ve got a fabulous imagination and I’m looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.