…and then the noise stopped

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3 Responses to …and then the noise stopped

  1. Amy says:

    Amazing adjectives and I love this bit ‘bright light’
    .Maybe next time please put capital letters at the start of the speech.

  2. Jessie says:

    Love the adjectivs!!Try to put speech in the write place please. Thanks and WELLDONE!!!!!!

  3. Mr K (Team 100wc) says:

    Hi Mia – yikes! What a terrifying 100wc – I’m not sure I’ll be able to sleep tonight!
    You’ve created a gripping and scary story – well done! Do remember to quickly check over those spellings – words like nightmare, petrified and hammering.
    Mr K (Team 100wc)
    🙂

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