Hi Barney its your sister here, Tabitha. I think that your description is very good because your useing lots of adjectives. You spelt some words wrong but other than that it was AMAZING to read.
Hi Barney,
Its is a great story. But remember to check it makes sense, and make sure you spell the word right.
Hope this helps, Bryn
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Hi Barney its your sister here, Tabitha. I think that your description is very good because your useing lots of adjectives. You spelt some words wrong but other than that it was AMAZING to read.
Hi Barney,
Its is a great story. But remember to check it makes sense, and make sure you spell the word right.
Hope this helps, Bryn