Hi Josephine,
I love the way you said “and darted around the nearest corner” because you did not say you ran around the nearest corner which is not as exiting as what you put,I also liked your description of “I watched the world go by as I ran along the road”. There was one part I did not get , when you said”my body was squashed it self together”.Please write more blogs ,they are so good .
Hi Josephine,
I love the way you said “and darted around the nearest corner” because you did not say you ran around the nearest corner which is not as exiting as what you put,I also liked your description of “I watched the world go by as I ran along the road”. There was one part I did not get , when you said”my body was squashed it self together”.Please write more blogs ,they are so good .
from sophia