Lovely description manon, I like the story plan and Iwish it carried on , NEXT TIME MAYBE READ THROUGH YOUR WORK AND CHECK YOUR SPELLINGS
I love the word ‘grunts’. Exelent decription . I wish it cept on going. NEXT TIME PLEASE SPELL HEART RIGHT. Apart from that amazing.
Hi Manon ! I really enjoyed reading your blog because you had loads of good description in it. I really liked the writing ! Next time maybe try to use less . ( Full stops ) and try and use more , ( Commas).
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Lovely description manon,
I like the story plan and Iwish it carried on ,
NEXT TIME MAYBE READ THROUGH YOUR WORK AND CHECK YOUR SPELLINGS
I love the word ‘grunts’.
Exelent decription .
I wish it cept on going.
NEXT TIME PLEASE SPELL HEART RIGHT.
Apart from that amazing.
Hi Manon ! I really enjoyed reading your blog because you had loads of good description in it. I really liked the writing ! Next time maybe try to use less . ( Full stops ) and try and use more , ( Commas).