Hi Maddie, you have really set the atmosphere in the descriptive peice of writing you wrote. It is also really exciting. Try to not repeat your descriptive words next time.
I really like your piece of writing. It is very descriptive and sends a scared shiver through your body. I also like how you describe every sound you introduce.
Hi Maddie, you have really set the atmosphere in the descriptive peice of writing you wrote. It is also really exciting. Try to not repeat your descriptive words next time.
Hello Maddie,
I really like your piece of writing. It is very descriptive and sends a scared shiver through your body. I also like how you describe every sound you introduce.
From Ethan