I like your 100wc. It makes the story more interesting when you give the character a name. I don’t think you need to put
“this is a made up story” at the top,though.
I really like your story. I like how you leave so much suspense at the end. I also noticed that in your writing you use great names. I also think that you didn’t need to say ‘this story isn’t true’.
Hi Hector
I like your 100wc. It makes the story more interesting when you give the character a name. I don’t think you need to put
“this is a made up story” at the top,though.
Hello Hector,
I really like your story. I like how you leave so much suspense at the end. I also noticed that in your writing you use great names. I also think that you didn’t need to say ‘this story isn’t true’.
from Ethan