sweets

2 Responses to sweets

1. Mrs Cohen says:

   February 25, 2012 at 7:23 pm

   Zoe, what a fabulous poem! I could almost taste the sweets swirling around in my mouth. I can see that you paid careful attention to your punctuation. Keep up the good work 🙂
2. aaima says:

   March 1, 2012 at 9:39 am

   great work zoe your poem awakened my taste buds

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