Hi Freya!
I like your 100wc as you chose the Christmas theme. I especially like the first sentence because you can imagine where the story takes place and what is going on. You have lots of speech, which is great, but I actually think you have too much.
Comments are closed.
Hi Freya!
I like your 100wc as you chose the Christmas theme. I especially like the first sentence because you can imagine where the story takes place and what is going on. You have lots of speech, which is great, but I actually think you have too much.