Hi Billy
I liked it when he stammered because it gave a real affect to it and shows that he is scared. You might be able to add a bit more description to it . But apart from that it was really good
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Hi Billy
I liked it when he stammered because it gave a real affect to it and shows that he is scared.
You might be able to add a bit more description to it .
But apart from that it was really good