Great Bryn! I love that you have demonstrated you can use a rhetorical question.
I love your descriptions, I particuly like the part where you say ‘Then one scientist screeched with joy.
Go back and check your work so it makes sense.
Wow Bryn ! I love your use of adjectives espeshaly ‘treacherours’. Your punctuation is very good and all your commers seem to be in the write place. maybe it’s just me but what are they trying to find?
Great Bryn! I love that you have demonstrated you can use a rhetorical question.
I love your descriptions, I particuly like the part where you say ‘Then one scientist screeched with joy.
Go back and check your work so it makes sense.
Wow Bryn ! I love your use of adjectives espeshaly ‘treacherours’. Your punctuation is very good and all your commers seem to be in the write place. maybe it’s just me but what are they trying to find?