Great job Abi, I really liked your personification E.G. Mist danced around me, maybe next time you could check your spellings because you got 2 wrong: The know weight canvas should really be, The now white canvas.
Your scene setting is really good in this piece Abi. It is clearly a strange scary place. Although your sleeping was not correct, I love the ‘now white canvas’. Very imaginative. I do look forward to reading more of your work next year!
Great job Abi, I really liked your personification E.G. Mist danced around me, maybe next time you could check your spellings because you got 2 wrong: The know weight canvas should really be, The now white canvas.
Your scene setting is really good in this piece Abi. It is clearly a strange scary place. Although your sleeping was not correct, I love the ‘now white canvas’. Very imaginative. I do look forward to reading more of your work next year!