I think your work is really good apart from there are some spelling mistakes and some things that don’t make sense. E.g. Someone said “could play” and no question mark. Also are in the that context would be spelt our. So apart from those two things it was brilliant and it set a picture in my head.
Dear Beatrix,
I think your work is really good apart from there are some spelling mistakes and some things that don’t make sense. E.g. Someone said “could play” and no question mark. Also are in the that context would be spelt our. So apart from those two things it was brilliant and it set a picture in my head.
Imogen.
That really made me laugh and it was very imaginative. However some parts didn’t make much
sense. Otherwise great job.
hi Beatrix your writing is realy good but you spelt locked wrong.