Hi Konstantinos,
I liked it how you ended with a short sentence. I also like it when you wrote ‘the paints began to move like a earthquake was striking.’ Apart from that really good.GREAT!
Konstantinos I love your sentence “They formed into the long shape,which looked like a shiny,sparkling rocket!”
It really made me feel like I was there and I was watching the amazing colours change into a magnificent rocket with my own eyes.
Hi Konstantinos,
I liked it how you ended with a short sentence. I also like it when you wrote ‘the paints began to move like a earthquake was striking.’ Apart from that really good.GREAT!
Konstantinos I love your sentence “They formed into the long shape,which looked like a shiny,sparkling rocket!”
It really made me feel like I was there and I was watching the amazing colours change into a magnificent rocket with my own eyes.