Your story is quite interesting, Freddie. You did an excellent job using descriptive language that painted a picture for the reader in a good way. I think you were smart not to cross the bridge, but you left me wondering what was causing the feeling. This is a good strategy to use.
Your story is quite interesting, Freddie. You did an excellent job using descriptive language that painted a picture for the reader in a good way. I think you were smart not to cross the bridge, but you left me wondering what was causing the feeling. This is a good strategy to use.
Ms. Sargent
Team 100WC – USA
Great description! I like the way you left the reader on a cliff hanger.