This is a really interesting use of the prompt, the storyline engages the reader well and I like the way that you use dialogue. I think the idea of a time machine is great and I would love to hear more about the adventures of the time machine, try to help the reader a bit by using capitals. Keep writing!
This is a really interesting use of the prompt, the storyline engages the reader well and I like the way that you use dialogue. I think the idea of a time machine is great and I would love to hear more about the adventures of the time machine, try to help the reader a bit by using capitals. Keep writing!