Goodness me Becca; what a scary story! And what makes it even more frightening is we don’t even know what ‘it’ was. Did you decide not to name or describe it on purpose? If so, that was a really powerful thing to do. My imagination romped away! One thing to watch out for though is punctuation – you went from ‘but in shock…’ right through to the end without a comma, fill stop or anything. Left me quite breathless 😉
Well done though.
Goodness me Becca; what a scary story! And what makes it even more frightening is we don’t even know what ‘it’ was. Did you decide not to name or describe it on purpose? If so, that was a really powerful thing to do. My imagination romped away! One thing to watch out for though is punctuation – you went from ‘but in shock…’ right through to the end without a comma, fill stop or anything. Left me quite breathless 😉
Well done though.