when i put the batteries in the controller 100 wc

1 Response to when i put the batteries in the controller 100 wc

1. Mrs Natusch says:

   January 20, 2014 at 3:05 am

   To Cem

   Wow! Imagine a controller coming to life after putting batteries inside it! What a creative way to begin your writing! Well done!
   You used a good sequence throughout your writing and it flowed really well. I was kept engaged the whole way through.

   From Mrs Natusch
   team 100WC
   NZ

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