Oh dear! Fighting with your brother over this is definitely not pleasant.
Hello Jessica, I’m so sorry you missed the question. Reading your story is fun but you need to make it clearer for your readers to understand the message you are trying to pass across. Well done or this contribution to 100wc!
Wow! In that story you and your silly brother are real silly and violent!!
I liked it though because it has very good adjetives and I can simply picture the story in my head 😀
Oh dear! Fighting with your brother over this is definitely not pleasant.
Hello Jessica, I’m so sorry you missed the question. Reading your story is fun but you need to make it clearer for your readers to understand the message you are trying to pass across. Well done or this contribution to 100wc!
Wow! In that story you and your silly brother are real silly and violent!!
I liked it though because it has very good adjetives and I can simply picture the story in my head 😀