i think your work is really good i thought it was very clether whene you rote all the alfbet it is amazing how you found a sentince to put for every word it showes info and at the same time it is fun to look at but i think whene you said arthur died befor his dad bad bad bad bad bad i think in sted of doing 5 bads you could had only 3 bads or it is two long.i also think insted of saying arthur died befor his dad you could have started whith a better beginning like a long time a go tuders came alive that is what i think you could have rote
Nice poem! 🙂
There is one problem though, ”where” is supposed too be spelt ”where” is spelt ”were”
This poem also helps on my thinking skills and rhyming too!
i think your work is really good i thought it was very clether whene you rote all the alfbet it is amazing how you found a sentince to put for every word it showes info and at the same time it is fun to look at but i think whene you said arthur died befor his dad bad bad bad bad bad i think in sted of doing 5 bads you could had only 3 bads or it is two long.i also think insted of saying arthur died befor his dad you could have started whith a better beginning like a long time a go tuders came alive that is what i think you could have rote
Nice poem! 🙂
There is one problem though, ”where” is supposed too be spelt ”where” is spelt ”were”
This poem also helps on my thinking skills and rhyming too!