This is great! I love the banter with the dad and how you describe the custard. You also give your reader a good sense of the characters and the dad. Good work! Keep it up!
Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg
Well done Amy! I love the way you used so many different virietys of punctuation. Your description of the ‘ lumpy custard’ really makes me want to be sick! carry on writing blogs like this one and you will be an amazing writer one day.
Great work!
This is great! I love the banter with the dad and how you describe the custard. You also give your reader a good sense of the characters and the dad. Good work! Keep it up!
Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg
Well done Amy! I love the way you used so many different virietys of punctuation. Your description of the ‘ lumpy custard’ really makes me want to be sick! carry on writing blogs like this one and you will be an amazing writer one day.
Great work!