I’m so glad I had my tea before reading your 100WC Neve. Eurggghhh! Although I love custard, I’m not sure I’ll be able to face it again without thinking of your story. I seem to remember my mum telling me how she liked the taste of some things that seemed awful to me … although I I’m glad to say don’t remember her chicken ever being ‘green.’ 😉
Writing down a conversation can be a tough thing to do, but you’ve had a good try at getting all the punctuation in the right places. Do remember though that capital letters are needed at the start of a sentence, even when writing what people are saying.
Well done Neve.
Hi Neve
I love it when you wrote ‘my tong has been posined’. I also loved it how you used different words like yelped and groaned. The think you could improve on is using the write spelling. Apart from that ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!
I’m so glad I had my tea before reading your 100WC Neve. Eurggghhh! Although I love custard, I’m not sure I’ll be able to face it again without thinking of your story. I seem to remember my mum telling me how she liked the taste of some things that seemed awful to me … although I I’m glad to say don’t remember her chicken ever being ‘green.’ 😉
Writing down a conversation can be a tough thing to do, but you’ve had a good try at getting all the punctuation in the right places. Do remember though that capital letters are needed at the start of a sentence, even when writing what people are saying.
Well done Neve.
Hi Neve
I love it when you wrote ‘my tong has been posined’. I also loved it how you used different words like yelped and groaned. The think you could improve on is using the write spelling. Apart from that ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!