Hi Mikail! Good description of the custard. Very creative that the custard was green and it turns you into dragon. They go
together. At the end you could write another word instead of using soared twice.
See you soon! Joseph.
Hi Mikail, what an interesting and original story you’ve written for this week’s 100WC. I really like how you’ve included some powerful vocabulary by using words like ‘soared’ and ‘open night’. A great piece of writing, well done 🙂
Hi Mikail! Good description of the custard. Very creative that the custard was green and it turns you into dragon. They go
together. At the end you could write another word instead of using soared twice.
See you soon! Joseph.
Hi Mikail, what an interesting and original story you’ve written for this week’s 100WC. I really like how you’ve included some powerful vocabulary by using words like ‘soared’ and ‘open night’. A great piece of writing, well done 🙂