Rivers

Posted on February 10, 2014 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to Rivers

  1. Ms Ashraf says:
    February 10, 2014 at 11:20 am

    I like the repetitive style that you have. You have worked hard at the rhyme.
    Can you explain how Rivers are made from hay?

  2. Zack says:
    February 10, 2014 at 11:23 am

    Brilliant writing, really good rhyme and a great ending to it.
    Well done.

  3. Isabel says:
    February 10, 2014 at 11:43 am

    I really like your rhyme. However how are ponds made of Hay?

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