A very dramatic poem. I really liked the alliteration and how the snow capped mountains soak up the water. Great use of ellipis.
Well done Zack ,you have used lots of good description and adjectives. Maybe you could write were the water started from. Konstantinos
Thank you for commenting Ms Ashraf. Actually I dont really know how snow capped mountains can soak up water I just looked at the picture and then BABAAM there it was.
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A very dramatic poem. I really liked the alliteration and how the snow capped mountains soak up the water.
Great use of ellipis.
Well done Zack ,you have used lots of good description and adjectives. Maybe you could write were the water started from. Konstantinos
Thank you for commenting Ms Ashraf.
Actually I dont really know how snow capped mountains can soak up water I just looked at the picture and then BABAAM there it was.