I love the way you have started this Mabel particularly because you have demonstrated that you can punctuate speech correctly like we practised in class last week. I would like to hear more about the dream though. You had just got started and then it suddenly stopped and it was getting exciting!
Hi Mabel,
I think you were really creative with your dream. I like that you have used speech correctly and made your blog very exiting.
You could maybe use some subordinate clauses.
But that would be your next step. I have really enjoyed reading this and I think everyone else would!
Well Done!
I love the way you have started this Mabel particularly because you have demonstrated that you can punctuate speech correctly like we practised in class last week. I would like to hear more about the dream though. You had just got started and then it suddenly stopped and it was getting exciting!
Hi Mabel,
I think you were really creative with your dream. I like that you have used speech correctly and made your blog very exiting.
You could maybe use some subordinate clauses.
But that would be your next step. I have really enjoyed reading this and I think everyone else would!
Well Done!