Brilliant Scarlet! Your blog is fantastic! You have used similes in your work; “The ground on the street was as cold as snow and as hard as metal. I loved how you used different words for said! I really can imagine just what it was like, tumbling on the street!
I liked that you wrote in third person, so I can know what your name is!
Before you wrote, when WE had realized …and after you said “That was funny ” shrieked SCARLET. But it would work if you were someone you didn’t mention.
However, I loved your work and it was a pleasure to read!
Brilliant Scarlet! Your blog is fantastic! You have used similes in your work; “The ground on the street was as cold as snow and as hard as metal. I loved how you used different words for said! I really can imagine just what it was like, tumbling on the street!
I liked that you wrote in third person, so I can know what your name is!
Before you wrote, when WE had realized …and after you said “That was funny ” shrieked SCARLET. But it would work if you were someone you didn’t mention.
However, I loved your work and it was a pleasure to read!